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Title: TWELVE: Power and Prestige 07 Apr 2014 11:48 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hmm, I didn't see any of it as flirting, just pushing each other's buttons?? Maybe I'll have to look closer but I recall being accused of flirting before when I was just trying to be nice - :-) maybe my "north" is just a little northwest.

    Again I like how Draco is human - just trying to survive in a war he is worried about losing.

    But HP is strongly heading towards being the next DARK LORD...kind of like it though so ok.
Title: TWELVE: Power and Prestige 07 Apr 2014 11:47 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hmm, I didn't see any of it as flirting, just pushing each other's buttons?? Maybe I'll have to look closer but I recall being accused of flirting before when I was just trying to be nice - :-) maybe my "north" is just a little northwest.

    Again I like how Draco is human - just trying to survive in a war he is worried about losing.
Title: TWELVE: Power and Prestige 29 Jul 2011 6:40 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmmmm. I can sort of see Harry thinking about his friendships that way. After all, he never had friends during his formative years, and his only examples were Dudley and his gang (if you could call them friends). Also, the emotional damage he suffered would cause issues with believing that he could be liked for himself.

    You know, I think Harry is being more truthful with Draco than he has been with almost everyone else. But that makes sense. He doesn't want to say anything that would chase Ron and Hermione away on the off-chance (to his mind) that they were his friends because he is "just Harry" rather than being "The-Boy-Who-Lived".

    Very sneaky of Draco that business with the cloak. Als, I can see him flirting (agressively or awkwardly) with Hermione. It's sort of the mirror of the good girl being attracted by the bad boy, isn't it?

    Excellent work again! Bravo!

    Author's Response:

    Harry is totally being more truthful with Draco, and for just the reasons you describe.  He doesn't believe it really matters what Draco thinks of him, so Draco's presence gives him carte blanche to say whatever he would like, to unload any truth he wants.  That's kind of attractive, I think, to someone like Harry, who is typically very closed-off.

    -K

Title: TWELVE: Power and Prestige 03 Jan 2008 6:58 am
Reviewer: Malora (Signed) [Report This]
    I like how Harry using one of the Unforgivables has consequences, and also the mystery element. Nice work!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much!  Did you notice the lack of such consequences in canon?  Urg.

    -K


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