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Reviews For the Secret of Slytherin
I loved the interaction with Myrtle. And duh, do I feel silly. Having Myrtle help when Harry, Ron, and Lockheart went into the Chamber was so obvious but it never occurred to me. Well, perhaps that was because it didn't occur to Harry and in JKRs books we are experiencing things from Harry's POV for the most part. Nice cliffhanger. Literally, in this case! Bravo! Author's Response: It's weird how much you catch when you're doing a re-write. As the author you see things in a certain way; as an author of fanfiction, you can't help but notice the little gaps here and there. JKR didn't have Myrtle help because it wasn't in line with her plot: her help would have made things too easy for Harry & Co. Since Harry was trapped in this case, I could make better use of her because she could only help with info, moving the characters forward just the tiniest little bit.
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