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Reviews For the Secret of Slytherin
Not really buying Harry's ok now just because he can self torture his internalization out of himself now. Still thinking he's on his way to be the next Dark Lord.
Author's Response: Wow. What a dreadful error, lol. I'm not super-awesome with canon, but I've known all along that Liy was Muggleborn. I'm not sure why that line is there, since I have now written this story (wow) - seven or eight years ago. Given the nature of the story, I was likely trying to point at prejudice again: how, since Lily was such a talented witch, Slughorn thought that she MUST have been a pureblood.
Or, you know. It's a mistake.
-K
But, I'm going to set that aside for now and go on to the next chapter. You write so well that it is sometimes hard to stop and review at the end of a chapter because I want to hurry up and see what happens next! Author's Response: I appreciate all your reviews, though! :) Just while answering them, you've reviewed three more chapters, and that makes you awesome in my book. :D I knew that whole 'chopping him into pieces' bit sounded familiar; I was raised on multiple mythologies but don't consciously recall everything I've read. And there's certainly a symbolic connection between what's happened to Evening Brother and Voldemort's choice to separate himself into smaller and smaller bits. Which is odd, b/c this was written before we knew about Horcruxes. ;) -K
Author's Response: Education is a wonderful thing, and I'm glad the story is jiving with yours. ;) -K |
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