| Title: TWENTY-EIGHT: Trust
| 07 Apr 2014 1:31 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Ok, a fitting punishment for Draco, only because it will gall him but I'd think he can deal. The worst part was admitting he trusted Harry.
Well, I think that on occasion Dumbledore would provide an extended field trip to the older students, and with Portkeys you don't really have a time problem with the distance between locations. Of course, I'm sure that some of the Professor would have to go along as chaperones.
Very fun to read! Bravo!
Author's Response: Thank you! -K
I'm pretty sure but nobody would be at Hogwarts during the summer months, i.e. AUGUST. Nearly every school in the uk is on summer holiday's during August till the very beginning of september, so its quite implausible for them to be going there for the weekend. Plus its quite a long way to travel, five hundred miles plus by floo??? and for the weekend? Not sure that Dumbles would be mad enough to let 15-17 to go off by themselves in the middle of London, yes its Diagon Alley and its separated from London proper but still! And(sorry about all the 'ands') there is no way in hell that anybody of the staff would let Harry go off with his friends unsupervised into the wizarding world hubbub with potential Deatheaters everywhere.
But apart from these points i liked it, the awkwardness between Harry and Draco is brilliant and some of the one liners from Snape and Draco are fab. Good Job.
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