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Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: THIRTY-SIX: Taught a Lesson 07 Apr 2014 2:41 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Going good so far, I like the Unsorted House though - it needs to return.

    And what is Ron going to say??
Title: THIRTY-SIX: Taught a Lesson 30 Jul 2011 1:34 am
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah, yes! The first class!

    I really liked how Harry handled the First Years, particularly by giving points to the student and not their House. And I was rolling on the floor laughing (well, figuratively anyway--I don't want to wreck my laptop) at his consternation with the 3rd, 4th and 5th year girls. I'm sure he was expecting some trouble with the upper years but not that!

    The scene between him and Severus was perfect. I can't think of anything that needs to be added or changed. It delighted me to see them interacting in this manner. I think My favourite line was Sev's "Of course I could" in the matter of making hte potions taste better.

    Bravo once more.

    Author's Response:

    heh heh!  Of course any students would love to make time with the famous Harry Potter, and how better but to angle for a detention.  Then, when you and HP are all alone, and he's very stern and you're oh-so-penitent... yeah, right, but I could imagine the average schoolgirl spinning an epic romance from that alone.

    Glad you liked the Severus-Harry interaction; those scenes were some of the most fun ones to write.

     

    -K


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