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Title: THIRTY-NINE: Betrayer 30 Jul 2014 12:35 pm
Reviewer: Otter (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was seriously awesome. You're making me like Ron way more than JKR did. I always thought she shortchanged his character. 10/10 for character development, dramatic tension, and fun!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much!  Glad you enjoyed it.  The sequel is on ff-dot-net, and twenty-five chapters in.  Swinging to the endzone, too.  :)

     

    -K

Title: THIRTY-NINE: Betrayer 07 Apr 2014 3:07 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Really awesome! Ron is great, too.

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: THIRTY-NINE: Betrayer 30 Jul 2011 3:14 am
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, you said we were down teh Rabbit Hole and I guess we are still free-falling or maybe its a ride in Gringott's cart's . All I know is that I am breathless and can't wait to read on.

    I aqbsolutely love Ron here. Despite the jealousy issues in 4th year with the TriWizard Tournament, he has always been at heart a very loyal person (I figured his leaving Harry and Hermione in Book 7 was due more to the effects of the locket Horcrux than anything else). Here we are also shown the fatal flaw of the intellectual in Hermione's response to the situation. I can sort of understand Harry. He's feeling incredibly betrayed. There's a lot of betrayal going on here, actually. Draco has possibly been betrayed by his mother and forced to take the Mark, Harry is betrayed by the fact that Drao now has the Mark and despite the flowering friendship still is programmed to expect the worst from anyone in Slytherin, and Ron feels betrayed by both Harry and Hermione for their apparent disloyalty. Wow!

    I've promised myself to check out your story recs once I've finished reading this story and your sequel. Everything you've mentioned sounds incredibly intriguing.

    Bravo again!

    Author's Response:

    <3 Ron! <3

    Yes, EVERYONE'S feelings are hurt.  Don't worry; I couldn't keep them miserable for long.  ;)

    -K

Title: THIRTY-NINE: Betrayer 22 Apr 2008 1:52 am
Reviewer: oodlesofmzness (Signed) [Report This]
    Ron's a Hufflepuff!!!!

    That is so awesome!!!!

    I love Hufflepuff....best house in my opinion...though that kinda ruins the whole point of you story doesnt it?

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