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Title: CHAPTER FORTY: a Proposal for Draco 07 Apr 2014 3:12 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Woe for poor Draco, what a time to behave Gryfindorish - although he is manipulating Severus. Excellent work!
Title: CHAPTER FORTY: a Proposal for Draco 30 Jul 2011 3:40 am
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    I just want to hug Draco and make everything all better for him right now. Of course, I know he'd probably immediately hex me.

    And Severus is wonderful in the way he handles this, regardless of his sometimes less than stellar personal skills.

    There are so many ways that this could have been written and I think you worked out the best possible way to do it. When Draco said the Deatheaters and Voldemort were waiting at the Manor I shivered with dread. When he said what he did about wishing he was a Gryffindor so that he could think of some way to keep his mother from dying, I had to go get the Kleenex. I have to say that I'm glad that the reason Narcissa had come to get him from Hogwarts was was due to Lucius being scheduled to be Kissed instead of her insisting that he be Marked.

    Oh, the heck with it! I'm going to give Draco a hug anyway!

    Author's Response:

    *Draco squirms away and gives you a suspicious glance.*

    I, for my part, thank you for another lovely review.  And Snape is getting the hang of this mentoring thing.  ;)

    -K


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