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Reviews For the Secret of Slytherin
Yes, Harry and Draco are so very much alike which is why they can only relate in extremes until they mature. They both have done a serious amount of growing up in this story, haven't they? I do hope that Severus survives. Not just for Draco's and Harry's sakes but also for Remus' sake. Thank you for allowing Draco to explain himself. The description of him as an angel as he stood by the window really got me. He is kind of a fallen and broken angel. You know, people mention fallen angels but no one ever mentions the results of that fall very much. The results were demonstratd here so very well, I could sort of see Draco's (metaphorical) broken and crushed wings. As for your rec. I have read it and agree with you entirely. I ws so frustrated with the spelling and grammar errors that I copied the printable version to word and corrected them as I went along then saved the document so I could read h story again when I wanted to without the frustration! Now your story is so well-written that I'm actually sad that I'm getting ready to read the last chapter. Bravissimi! Author's Response: *smishes Draco, who accepts it this time...* LOL, I think he's too messed up here to turn down any comfort. :( I think I understand your impulse, but I have to wonder what story (except one's own) is worth that much effort! -K |
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