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Title: CHAPTER FORTY: a Proposal for Draco 07 Apr 2014 3:12 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Woe for poor Draco, what a time to behave Gryfindorish - although he is manipulating Severus. Excellent work!
Title: THIRTY-NINE: Betrayer 07 Apr 2014 3:07 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Really awesome! Ron is great, too.

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: THIRTY-EIGHT: Gryffindor Versus Slytherin 07 Apr 2014 3:04 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Excellent!
Title: THIRTY-SEVEN: Unity in Adversity 07 Apr 2014 2:51 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    :/ now i feel bad for mentioning the shortness of the chapters. But this story is great, especially enjoy how Harry managed the students detention, didn't think Neville would have so much of an issue and thought Ron would have more. Hmm. I trust you to keep the story interesting. Nice of McGonagal? to give such good advice and using Harry's unique experience too. At the risk of detention Bloody Brilliant!
Title: THIRTY-SIX: Taught a Lesson 07 Apr 2014 2:41 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Going good so far, I like the Unsorted House though - it needs to return.

    And what is Ron going to say??
Title: THIRTY-FIVE: Slytherin! 07 Apr 2014 2:34 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well, Draco will like it and yes, that was a completely impulsive gesture but it will shake up the houses still.
Title: THIRTY-FOUR: Question and Answer 07 Apr 2014 2:26 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    It helps for variety having Draco involved with Harry and Hermione and Ron. Snape is confused and Dumbledore is even more enigmatic than usual. Pretty good. Still doesn't explain why Draco was pulled exactly or why he'll be let back in.
Title: THIRTY-THREE: the Missing Hour 07 Apr 2014 2:19 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hmm, ") good chapter. I like that you left the letters as you worked through them. Gives insight into your process.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!  I like it when reality is useful to the story.  :D

     

    -K

Title: THIRTY-TWO: In the Headmaster's Office 07 Apr 2014 2:14 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yes, I noticed that too - doesn't Dumbledore could be a Slytherin easily. I guess it works having Snape be mean under Imperious but not sure.

    Have to wait and see I suppose. I do agree Harry plays everything close to his vest - ") No question about it. It is his natural skill, sheer luck, fate ...or eternal vigilance by Members of the Order that preserve the wizard world and allow Harry to still be alive. However, to steal a line from HPMoR - they could have solved all their problems by simply owling every Death Eater a hand grenade.

    Or, in other words as a friend likes to query "What would Wolverine do?" Lol.
Title: THIRTY-ONE: Building a Mystery 07 Apr 2014 2:01 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I wondered when Dumbledore was going to make his appearance, seems reasonable he was staying out of things because he's quietly pulling strings behind the scenes - a little surprising Snape or even Harry would allow themselves to be Imperius'd by even Dumbledore.

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