lol... Poor Malfoy. Actually, I do like Malfoy,or otherwise known as Draco in my books. :) This is agreat punishment and I like the idea of Harry casting an Unforgiveable (maybe because I like Dark!Harry, as well). I surprised Hermione and Ron (especially Hermione) haven't figured out that Harry is one of those Slytherins in Gryffindor.

 Well, I can't wait to see where you take Harry and Draco next! Update soon!

I love it!!!  I couldn't review because I did not want to stop reading long enough to do so.  Thanks for inserting chapter 3.  It helped explain what will probably be an important aspect of your story.  The last chapter was exciting:  I think Draco got off lightly.  After all, he started doing cruicio first!! Yet no one said anything, Harry's self reasoning aside.  It's good to know what Harry was doing to himself and I did think it would turn out to be bad.  Does he yet know occulumency?  I think Snape's punishment was too much, but obviously you don't since you are the 'voice of God' who directs everything.  I'm looking forward to Harry and Draco coming to some sort of understanding in the future based on a week of "togetherness."  Hermoinie is one the warpath!!!!!  Love it!

 Remember, I'm not asking questions that have to be answered.  As a teacher, we teach students to make predictions about what we think will happen next.  I do that with stories I read by chapters not so much to get answers from the author, I'd much rather they write more story for me to read and find out if I was right or wrong that way!  It's an indication of someone really enjoying what is happening in the story and engaged in the characters!!!!  Thanks for writing  more!!!!  I bet you never thought you'd have a teacher thanking you for writing!

I really like this fiction! The writing style is phenomenal and I really like the way you made Harry and Snape's relationship!  Please update soon!  I can't wait!