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Title: THIRTY: Surprise 07 Apr 2014 1:47 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hmm, I like when you make it comedic! This is going to be interesting, maybe Draco can convince his parents he was under compulsion....although he doesn't want Harry in Azkaban so not sure how he'll play it. His mother may be able to be bribed.
Title: TWENTY-NINE: Juxtaposition 07 Apr 2014 1:40 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very comedic indeed! Snape would be properly horrified but nothing compared to what Lucius will say to Draco if he finds out. Probably Crucio Draco. Kind of awesome that Draco understands Hermione for just a moment.

    Zipper is my favorite bit though - that and losing his custom robes!

    Author's Response:

    Glad you enjoyed it; people had surprisingly violent reactions to this chapter.  "How could you make Draco get rid of his original clothing?  That's abuse!"  It is harsh, but certainly far less harsh than some of the other things that happen to the characters in this story, and I've often wondered why many people have had such a strong opinion on it.

     

    It may be from my teen readers, who consider clothing more closely associated with identity than most adults do.  In that light, the others are saying that who Draco was ought to be destroyed: they are remaking him.  It's not just a makeover chapter, but an utter rejection of Draco's old identity.

     

    Come to think, that's exactly what I DID mean it to symbolize.  Ginny wants Draco to reject his old, pureblooded way of looking at the world, and she's going from the outside, in.

     

    -K

Title: TWENTY-EIGHT: Trust 07 Apr 2014 1:31 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ok, a fitting punishment for Draco, only because it will gall him but I'd think he can deal. The worst part was admitting he trusted Harry.
Title: TWENTY-SEVEN: a Small Detail 07 Apr 2014 1:22 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hmm, Severus's spiel was not what i expected at all - much better in fact. I agree the changing of the grades presages a much darker secret. I like Remus and Snape's new friendship.
Title: TWENTY-SIX: Ravenclaw Versus Slytherin 07 Apr 2014 1:08 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Still excellent - my reviews are short but so are the chapters. And I've never reviewed every chapter of any story before...making me wonder about Imperio??

    Author's Response:

    HAHAHA!

     

    (*slides wand up sleeve*)  What on earth are you talking about?

     

    -K

Title: TWENTY-FIVE: Remus Lupin Versus the Establishment 07 Apr 2014 1:01 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good move by Remus, well thought out. Only Snape has what it takes to out-badger and out-think Umbridge
Title: TWENTY-FOUR: a Strange Lot 07 Apr 2014 12:55 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Really good! Draco is getting even more likable...but your Harry's due to do something really aweful. Pushing Draco up against the wall is just a teaser.
Title: TWENTY-THREE: to Waste Your Hatred 07 Apr 2014 12:49 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hate is very close to love.
Title: TWENTY-TWO: Once Upon a Time 07 Apr 2014 12:44 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Like the fairy tale, it rings true and I've read a lot of fairy tales and folklore - African, Indian, Native American, Irish, Celtic, Chinese, Japanese and Eastern and Western European.
    Not really buying Harry's ok now just because he can self torture his internalization out of himself now. Still thinking he's on his way to be the next Dark Lord.
Title: TWENTY-ONE: a Reversal of Fortune 07 Apr 2014 12:34 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well, just have to wait and see - this is tit for tat but might be interesting.

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