| Title: TWENTY: Game
| 07 Apr 2014 12:29 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Good final move by Harry!
| Title: NINETEEN: the Chamber of Secrets
| 07 Apr 2014 12:24 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Hmm, well I guess this is plausible - but unless I missed it, what is Draco going to ask?
| Title: EIGHTEEN: the Cavalry
| 07 Apr 2014 12:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Hmm, not surprising, Draco is an incredibly F**d up kid too. Harry gives him a sense of control and power and makes him feel good. He'll lose that if Harry dies - that and he isn't as cold blooded as he'd like to believe. Draco just doesn't realize that.
Author's Response: Very astute.
| Title: SEVENTEEN: Down in the Dark
| 07 Apr 2014 12:11 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Ooo, I really like this. In which Harry is showing signs of the strain and has discovered a great secret!
| Title: SIXTEEN: a Shift in Perspective
| 07 Apr 2014 12:07 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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I like the Remus interaction with Snape too.
| Title: FIFTEEN: Hermione's Revenge
| 07 Apr 2014 12:04 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Still waiting to see. Mirring other's actions is a time tested method to make them feel comfortable - under certain circumstances that is - torture is an exception.
| Title: FOURTEEN: Revealeo
| 07 Apr 2014 12:00 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Hmm, still don't see that Snape didn't put a stop to Draco...but we'll see how that goes. Harry doesn't have the temperament to just forget - even accounting for the Obscura...
| Title: THIRTEEN: The Tower
| 07 Apr 2014 11:54 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Hmm, I like it so far! Much more interesting than just another story about how much Harry is misunderstood by Snape - but the only unbelievable part of this is Snape allowing this to happen...and Dumbledore too because it will be irreversible - oh Ron and Hermione will forgive - Hermione will figure it out soon but Harry can't forgive himself that easily.
Excellent though!
| Title: TWELVE: Power and Prestige
| 07 Apr 2014 11:48 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Hmm, I didn't see any of it as flirting, just pushing each other's buttons?? Maybe I'll have to look closer but I recall being accused of flirting before when I was just trying to be nice - :-) maybe my "north" is just a little northwest.
Again I like how Draco is human - just trying to survive in a war he is worried about losing.
But HP is strongly heading towards being the next DARK LORD...kind of like it though so ok.
| Title: TWELVE: Power and Prestige
| 07 Apr 2014 11:47 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Hmm, I didn't see any of it as flirting, just pushing each other's buttons?? Maybe I'll have to look closer but I recall being accused of flirting before when I was just trying to be nice - :-) maybe my "north" is just a little northwest.
Again I like how Draco is human - just trying to survive in a war he is worried about losing.
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