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Reviews For 43 Months
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HI, it is wonderful, the end brought me to the bring of tears. °^___^° Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it :)
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Awww! I'm not usually a fan of one shots, but you managed to capture the feeling well. Good job. SHEla WOLFsbane Author's Response: Thanks!
Author's Response: The ending was the hardest part to write; I wasn't quite sure how to do it. I think it worked out okay though.
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That was beautiful, Lanta. I'm sitting here with tears in my eyes and...and...oh, it was just beautiful. Thank you for posting it. -Kelly Author's Response: Thanks for the compliments! I'm glad you liked it.
This story was a beautifully written and more realistic view of what happens when someone de-aged is returned to his previous older age. I always found it slightly disturbing when in some other de-aging stories the characters involved go from a parent /child role to lovers when the de-aging process has been reversed. Anyway you have done a great job showing the conflict between the two people involved when things returned to what is deemed normal. Well done. Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I'm glad you appreciated my story :) |
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