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Title: Chapter 1 01 Oct 2006 5:41 pm
Reviewer: MaireadInish (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice start. I'm looking forward to seeing more.
Title: Chapter 1 01 Oct 2006 11:00 am
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm hooked!  But why would Severus think Harry is Daddy?  He knew he had a daddy, all babies do.  And from what so many writers believe, his real father was no picnic.  But I'm happy for the both of them.  I love reverse stories.  Thanks for starting this one.
Title: Chapter 1 01 Oct 2006 8:17 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]

    Aw, I just love this! Little Snape's so cute and I love how it started with him completely asleep. I like the way Harry decided to call him Severus and not Snape and how he's slipping at first before correcting himsel.f I really liked the part about the wizarding portrait in the Dursley's house.. i bet the Dursley's end up putting a wall over it. XD They really are so odd, but what else could they do? I love Winky, she's a sweet house elf in your fic and I love how she and Dobby like the baby.

    “Severus Snape, step forward. You have been given the honour of testing the new potion.” Oh my. To hear Voldemort just say it like that... he really is crazy! I love how later Snape's all like "and later I will test my blood to see what the potion is." LOL why couldn't Voldemort have done that? I guess it amuses him more to do it the other way. *shudder*

    Thanks so much for posting! :D I love Reverse fics, how fun! 

Title: Chapter 1 01 Oct 2006 8:15 am
Reviewer: Jade (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Absolutely delightful. Please continue!


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