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Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Enough is enough 07 Nov 2022 1:02 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    What a horrific start for Harry with a compelling chapter end.
Title: Enough is enough 19 Jun 2020 12:07 pm
Reviewer: PhoenixFeathers (Signed) [Report This]
    Vernon is such a fucking wimp when it comes to magic 😂😂😂
Title: Enough is enough 01 May 2019 3:36 pm
Reviewer: Scarlett Diaz-Sky (Signed) [Report This]
    Amazing!!
Title: Enough is enough 29 Apr 2018 8:30 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow great start to your story thank you so much
Title: Enough is enough 23 Jun 2011 12:57 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    excellant start! umm...i saw a few errors, you may want your betta to take another look.

    on to the next chappie!
Title: Enough is enough 24 Apr 2007 7:12 pm
Reviewer: ddamato (Signed) [Report This]
    I love that last line--I love the image of Snape, his arms crossed, robes billowing--great imagery!
Title: Enough is enough 16 Apr 2007 2:52 am
Reviewer: Tracy (Signed) [Report This]
    Solitare,
    Finally I am getting around to reading this story! You just got to LOVE to HATE Vernon don't you? LOL! The man is a beast and I wanted to cheer when Harry stood up to him.

    Luckily, I don't have to wait for the next chapter, or the one after that, or after that....VBG!
    Tracy
Title: Enough is enough 03 Apr 2007 7:45 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice start. I like that you have Harry stop the abuse before it gets terrible. I have never pictured Harry as the type to allow himself to be horribly abused, especially since he now knows he can do magic for self-defense. The description of Snape in the last paragraph was a very nice visual.

    However, please, please, please fix this line:
    "He sighed and slid the picture underneath his pillow and lied down..."
    The whole lie, lay, lain thing gets me, too, but I'm almost certain this should be "and lay down." This sounds funny to most people. "and laid down" is not correct but at least sounds better than "lied" which is NOT the past tense of "lay". ;-)
Title: Enough is enough 20 Feb 2007 8:30 am
Reviewer: Kirinin (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay, *wow*. You've put together the first, ONLY realistic scene of a beating I've ever seen done in fandom. Honestly, I don't even read these stories anymore - or not usually, anyway - because Harry sits there and takes the beating, and phases out because he's somehow "used" to the blows.

    Your story is different. Harry remains in character instead of cowering in a corner (this thoughts about attempting to reach his wand are well-done). The first blow comes so suddenly that he doesn't know he's been hit until he hits the floor - gut-jarringly realistic, there. And there's a horrible pain in his knee before it goes somewhat numb. You seem to actually know what you're talking about. Lo and behold!

    ;)

    -K
Title: Enough is enough 21 Nov 2006 2:34 am
Reviewer: hpmara727@yahoo.com (Anonymous) [Report This]

    What a great start to the story. I did notice in the early paragraphs that this sentence is missing a few words:
    "He stood Hedwig on his arm and quickly walked her, still nuzzling him." ; just forgot 'to the window'

    You definately had Harry's stoicism with the knee pain and climbing the steps into the bus. 

     


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