Ha! This is great!! Great start, and you did the confrontation between Harry and his uncle well. You didn't overdo th einjuries, but it was serious enough that Harry's having trouble. Fantastic pace! I can just tell that your Snape is in character.
Ooo..write more quick, please! :)
I'm very interested to see where this is going. Good start.
Interesting start. Please continue.
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| 02 Oct 2006 3:38 pm
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| Reviewer: Saphire Starlet (Anonymous)
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Oh good start! Please update soon!
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| 02 Oct 2006 12:15 pm
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| Reviewer: Visitor (Anonymous)
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Harry's not having a good day at all!
Love this fic, can't wait to read more!
| Title: Enough is enough
| 02 Oct 2006 7:10 am
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| Reviewer: Night_Childe25 (Anonymous)
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Enjoyed it. Hurry with the next chapter.
Bum-bum-buuum (ominous music). Uh,oh, Snape found Harry all alone, in the middle of the night, outside the Leaky Cauldron. What going to happen to him? Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Interesting start. Now, is Sev going to notice Harry's injuries, or is he going to be a thick idiot and not see? Please, update soon.
| Title: Enough is enough
| 02 Oct 2006 3:53 am
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| Reviewer: Mia (Anonymous)
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You must continue! I love this story!
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