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Title: That greasy git! 07 Nov 2022 1:10 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry is so combative! Snape is handling it well.
Title: That greasy git! 29 Apr 2018 8:46 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Normal service has been resumed! Well done Severus and of course you!
Title: That greasy git! 23 Jun 2011 1:11 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    aww! he's got a soft spot! I'm really loving this fic!
Title: That greasy git! 16 Apr 2007 3:42 am
Reviewer: Tracy (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry has a lot of anger and who can blame him? He gets the snot beat out of him and winds up with somebody he doesn't like or trust forcing him to accept their help. That said, I do admire Snape's dogged determination to do the right thing even if it isn't appreciated.
    Another great chapter hon,
    Tracy
Title: That greasy git! 13 Oct 2006 1:38 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]

    Fantastic! This is the type of story that I reread paragraphs over and over again because i enjoy them so much. I love, love your Snape. Wonderful job on him and his dialouge is very true. Everything he says is very entertaining. There are erros in this chapter too you need to go back and take a look at. :) Many. Please try to correct them, otherwise it hurts the story.

    You may want to reconsider this: Snape sighed as he grabbed one of Harry’s wrists to keep the boy from punching him. This is the second time I've seen an action refered to only after it happened, passively. In this case, Harry trying to punch Snape. It makes it seem delayed. Afterwards you used it again.

Title: That greasy git! 05 Oct 2006 1:25 pm
Reviewer: Ann (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Anlther lovely chapter.  Harry and Snape seem very much in character.
Title: That greasy git! 04 Oct 2006 9:07 pm
Reviewer: celenesnape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Please keep writing this fic, Harry and Snape characters are good constructed and in character. I liked it very much, look forward to seeing how this develops.
Title: That greasy git! 04 Oct 2006 9:23 am
Reviewer: Lynx_lw (Anonymous) [Report This]

    This`s turning to be very interesting...

    I always imegined Snape like the person that knows 101 ways to make a potion and 101 ways to make you swallow it. So it was very funny to read those parts ;)

Title: That greasy git! 04 Oct 2006 5:00 am
Reviewer: pdantzler (Signed) [Report This]

    Like this chapter. I think Snape needs to step in and take control before Harry distroys himself.

     I would like to see longer chapters though. You get us into the story, and then it's over. (pouts). Give us more, give us more! 



    Author's Response: Thank you and dont worry the next chapter is going to be much longer as there is a lot i need to fit in with it.
Title: That greasy git! 03 Oct 2006 9:28 pm
Reviewer: Carrie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I enjoyed it immensely!  Update soon!  I really like the antagonism you've got going here!

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