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Title: Never Cross a Slytherin 07 Nov 2022 1:15 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter, thanks.
Title: Never Cross a Slytherin 30 Apr 2018 6:07 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a lovely chapter. I like the fact that Severus has not gone mushy on Harry
Title: Never Cross a Slytherin 16 Apr 2007 3:55 am
Reviewer: Tracy (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my, so we are going to throw Draco into the mix are we? I'd say that'll do nothing to improve Harry's temper! LOL!
    Tracy
Title: Never Cross a Slytherin 13 Mar 2007 10:27 pm
Reviewer: Athena_Rhea (Anonymous) [Report This]
    " "Severus, you really should take this chance to get to know Harry.” he was being entirely to cheerful. "

    This isn't grammatically correct, it should read: "Severus, you really should take this chance to get to know Harry." He was being entirely too cheerful. -

    Not Correct: “Well Severus, if that is all we have to talk about, I’ll leave Harry in your very capable hands,”

    Correct: "Well Severus, if that is all we have to talk about, I'll leave Harry in your very capable hands."

    And it's Grimmauld Place, just so you know. I'm not telling you these things to be mean, I really do quite like this fic so far and I'm merely pointing out bits that could be better. ^^ So, forge on!
Title: Never Cross a Slytherin 20 Feb 2007 8:51 am
Reviewer: Kirinin (Signed) [Report This]
    Grimwauld should be Grimmauld, and literate should be articulate (as Harry is speaking and not writing). You need a beta!

    Snape having Harry alone in the same house as he is, warded to the nines, sounds like a great Death Eater opportunity to me. What's to prevent Snape from giving Harry to the DEs? I don't think Snape *would*, mind you, because I think he's loyal to Dumbledore; what I mean is that from the perspective of the DEs, this is the perfect opportunity for Snape to kill Harry off. One would think that Draco would report this to his father and there would be Trouble. I'm liking your setup, though. :) I do sort of wonder what you believe Draco's loyalties to be, however.

    But maybe you like Draco and he is firmly on Dumbledore's side? I like him. :)

    -K
Title: Never Cross a Slytherin 02 Nov 2006 2:24 am
Reviewer: Mrs_Morbid_Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really liked your story. Adding Draco as a baby-sitter is something I never thought would happen, update soon!
Title: Never Cross a Slytherin 24 Oct 2006 5:11 pm
Reviewer: Karen (Anonymous) [Report This]
    So update already. I have patiently waited almost two days now.  I love this stuff.  I think I"m addicted.  Thanks

    Author's Response: Lol, I'm getting there but I have finals for my college so need to worry about that, will work on it again soon!
Title: Never Cross a Slytherin 23 Oct 2006 4:47 am
Reviewer: Karen (Anonymous) [Report This]
    So what's next?  I was well into this and then it stopped.   Will look for an update asap.  Thanks
Title: Never Cross a Slytherin 13 Oct 2006 1:50 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]

    “Away from you! You keep pouring potions down my throat!” Hahaha! there are so many great lines in this and Snape is positively evil! Telling Harry that Draco's coming over? Oh, priceless. And he's actually going to do it! Oh man. Great fic. Fantastic! I'm a little annoyed at Harry, he's brat but that makes him fun! This is a super enjoyable fic. Please keep writing! :D

    if left alone to long You use "to" a lot when it's supposed to be "too". "Too" means "as well" and it's also used to express more of something like "too bad", "too long". "To" is when you go "to" a place or if you go do something. it's part of the infinitive, like "to be", "to run", ect.

Title: Never Cross a Slytherin 10 Oct 2006 5:39 pm
Reviewer: lilyseverus (Anonymous) [Report This]
    UPDATE!!! I can't wait for the next chapter...

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