This must be about the fifth time I've read this, hoping against hope that potions and snitches made a mistake and really you had uploaded another chapter.....*sigh* alas it was not true *pout* please please PLEASE finish this. It's too good to waste :)
Hehehe. I love it!! :D Nice emotions. love your SNape and Harry is being delightfully teenagerish. I hope that the DA does grow up.
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww I so want more I love these two
and Draco
I really hope to see more of this some day. I love how you portray all the characters and how in character they seem. I also really like how you have the Slytherins being more willing to be friendly with Potter, as seen in the birthday party chapter. Hopefully there will be more interaction between them and Harry.
I really liked the dream sequence with Salazar in it. Is it bad that I kinda want Harry resorted? Plus, the fact that Dumbledore seems like a user in your story (which I can entirely see, even in strict book and movie canon) and I don't want him to have too much power over Harry.
So is Snape really going to adopt Harry, cuz that would be wicked!?!
| Title: Expectations
| 04 Jul 2009 9:36 pm
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| Reviewer: asdf (Anonymous)
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Awesome story! Poor Harry he's in so much pain and confusion right now I hope it gets better for him.
I like how you've written Draco and I'm glad he's a good friend of Harry's.
I just think Harry should be more grateful to Snape, I don't think he's thanked Snape properly yet.
Snape is brilliant in this story, I like how you've developed his character in regards to being Harry's guardian.
| Title: Expectations
| 12 May 2009 5:44 pm
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| Reviewer: Rebel_Dream (Anonymous)
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Thank you for such a wonderful story. I am looking forward to seeing more. : ) Keep up the great work!
| Title: Expectations
| 29 Jan 2009 9:04 pm
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| Reviewer: RhiannanT (Anonymous)
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Wonderful! Can't wait for the next installment!
great chapter, i really enjoyed reading it and yes the da do need to grow up as if they are always bickering mouldywarts will win the war and no one will be safe
Aw, Did I tell you already how glad I am that you have decided to update this story.
I started this story a long time ago, and kept going back regularly to see if you had updated, and when so long had passed and you still hadn't updated, I thought that it was abanadoned.
I'm was so excited when I saw the story here, and that you had not abandoned it.
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