| Title: The Power of Voice
| 15 Dec 2020 4:12 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Love both those carols and the story thank you
| Title: The Power of Voice
| 02 Oct 2010 2:11 am
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| Reviewer: Annie (Anonymous)
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This was really good, but I felt that it was a bit rushed.
The Prince Manor? =) Ever read Snapegirl's stories? x)
Loved!
This was really good, I enjoyed it a lot. You might want to think about putting the "Suicidal-themes, and self-harm" warnings on there so no one will say anything. Good Job.
| Title: The Power of Voice
| 22 Jun 2009 5:43 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Poor Harry. It was terrible how he needed to cut himself. The opening description was well done. Very good job getting attention while setting the scene. I didn't really like the introduction of the lyrics of the song. It was a lot of lines of stuff I didn't understand, and couldn't hear. It was a little distracting and completely threw me out of the story. : I think that tends to happen with all song fics, though.
I'm not sure that a whispered song can have that much effect on someone as Snape's did on Harry, unless some magic was involved. I was rather surprised that Harry told Snape that he was about to jump from the astronomy tower, and that the song stopped him, and that Snape wasn't all that surprised. I feel like he should be more worried at Harry's confession. After Snape told Harry to leave, asking when the last time he ate was a little random. I think maybe if Snape had been more concerned at first, and asked questions, it would have worked better. The snake talking was a little random - I think that maybe more introduction of it from Snape would have helped, or hearing about it from Snape's perspective and his thoughts as to why he was giving it to Harry.
I really liked the progression, and how Harry started taking meals with Snape, but it doesn't really explain why. Did Harry just want to? how did he know where to go?
I'm glad that Harry was able to finish Voldemort off. I also liked that Snape ended up adopting Harry at the end, and that they went to Prince Manor. That was nice. :)
| Title: The Power of Voice
| 26 Jul 2008 2:25 am
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| Reviewer: GoLd (Signed)
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SEQUEL!!!!! THIS IS TOO GOOD TO END!!! Or a longer story version!!!
| Title: The Power of Voice
| 03 Jun 2008 12:41 am
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| Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous)
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Lovely! Just lovely! I've been a professional chorister, and I too can testify to the strength and beauty that is in Latin plainchant and hymnody!
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