wow.
Simply amazing.
Awesome.
It's one of the best short stories I've ever read. I like narration - the first person, the present time - I like content, I like Severus of yours. And Harry, who is really cunning and smart and strangely understanding.
Yes, of course, I'd love if there would be more chapters, but this way this story is so special, I think. Because the only thing I can do right now is thinking, what Severus will do with his knowledge, how it will end. It's really fascinating.
Bil, you have my true... gratitude ;-).
Wow. Such a strong Harry! I also like the way you have Voldemort capable of holding a conversation with Harry without just being a mess of melodrama. Well done!
This one deserves another chapter - as do some of your other stories. Yes, they all quite happily stand alone, but several would do well with more chapters.
Man, I didn't expect that at the end!
Great story, especially that last line.
Love it!
-Elise
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| 10 Nov 2007 7:03 am
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I stand in awe of what you have written.
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| 04 Nov 2007 10:11 pm
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Amazing. Absolutely amazing. And I don't think it was too much out of character. Fabulous job.
Fantanstic! Not overly 'emotional', great way of doing it from snape's pov.
I do love this one! Actually, I've read it before elsewhere. You are so good with one-shots.
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| 16 Oct 2006 3:27 am
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