I really like dthis one! I found it quite different. I remember that I liked the power play. I would have liked to see more tone in the first part of dialouge, there is mostly just descriptions of physical changes. It leaves me guessing. :)

I adored how it ended and i really liked how Harry obliviated SNape and how everything changed, he was the overwhelmed kid. I especially liked how Snape did not talk back to him with his usual hatred, but instead was just monotone. I suppose that giving Harry the lemon drop tin was his way of saying that he accepted Harry taking Dumbledore's place.

What I'd really like to see, is Snape mentoring Harry in how to be the leader, or just guiding him for awhile. But I suppose we have no chance of that, huh?