I really liked this one-shot, for the show between Harry and SNape and that Snape was able to teach Harry something he should already know. I liked that it didn't turn out good, that Snape left and they "damaged one of our most important allies", I assume it's Snape," and damaged Harry's soul.

These were my favourite lines: "Harry sighed and wished he could be in a different story, where there would be good guys and bad guys and he would be able to tell which was which just by looking at their faces."

And, "Your happiness has never been a priority of mine." That's too true though. Very canon and it struck me.

Good job. Thanks for sharing it.