Fantastic story! I cannot wait for part two! I just read this story straight through, and I loved every bit of it. My anticipation for what happens next is very great. Please update soon with the second part of this thrilling tale. Terrific job!
Awww, great! I just skipped ahead to this chapter and it was a GREAT chapter. I loved the talk between Snape and Dumbledore. Your Dumbledore is pretty amazing as a developed character. He's full of depth, and stuff I haven't seen before, really. I really enjoyed the Occlumency scene. And there's a sequel? COOL!
One typo: Mastering Occlumenct is quite an achievement;
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