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Title: Chapter 13-fading away 20 Dec 2006 11:20 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Wow. Keepup the great work. I am so loving this more and more as you keep writing. Every chapter is better! Love it, thanks for sharing with the rest of us Harry and Snape fans!!!;).

     

Title: Chapter 11-progress and rejection 16 Dec 2006 10:07 pm
Reviewer: sweets2 (Signed) [Report This]

    Great chapter.  I can't believe how well the characters are being portrayed.  I also didn't think Draco could ever truly befriend any of them.  Since he has too much thoughts of domination and jealousy in him. 

     

    Please update again soon.

Title: Chapter 11-progress and rejection 15 Dec 2006 9:25 pm
Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Anonymous) [Report This]

    HI, I like your story very much and it well written as well as cute, sometimes funny and exciting. I am eager to get to know what will happy to Sev and Harry and especially with Draco.

    Your Melfdragon

     

Title: Chapter 10-Revelations 03 Dec 2006 3:35 am
Reviewer: blue artemis (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Such confused boys.  More alike than they are willing to admit, too.  A lovely chapter.  
Title: Chapter 10-Revelations 02 Dec 2006 5:31 pm
Reviewer: chmcm (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good chapter.  I am enjoying your story,
Title: Chapter 9-Draco's Elf and A Step Forward and A Step Backward 26 Nov 2006 7:40 pm
Reviewer: Spiorad (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OH! I absolutly love this fic! It is so close to home and so heartrenching. Please update soon! I cant wait to see what happens next. :)

    ~Spiorad
Title: Chapter 8-SoMeThInG wIcKeD 25 Nov 2006 9:58 am
Reviewer: veritas (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I must say that I have really enjoyed this story so far. I love the interaction between Harry and Draco with Snape. The idea of Harry overdosing on dreamless sleep potion was very interesting, and I have loved all of the chapters that have followed it. I do admit though that I have read all of the chapters, but so far this is my first review for the story. I apologize, though as a college student it is very difficult to find any free time. Thanks for the great story, and I really look forward to reading some more!
Title: Chapter 8-SoMeThInG wIcKeD 22 Nov 2006 10:55 pm
Reviewer: Karen (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You have done a wonderful job with this so far.  You are too brilliant and talented.  Please continue with this and update soon.  Thanks
Title: Chapter 8-SoMeThInG wIcKeD 21 Nov 2006 5:13 pm
Reviewer: blue artemis (Anonymous) [Report This]
    A sad, haunting (no pun intended) chapter. 
Title: Chapter 4 - Pain 21 Nov 2006 4:16 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]

    I really like how Harry just keeps thinking and saying that he's just got the flu. I love Snape's outrage about Harry stealing from him and how expressed it to Harry. Snape then whispered icily into Harry’s ear, "Don’t ever steal from me again!" Fantastic job!

    I love that when Harry woke up, Dumbledore was there to help and comfort him. That's a beautiful scene but I think that Dumbledore's list of everything Snape did for Harry detracts from it. I think you should shorten that part and take out "...and he has spent the other half sitting here with you, helping you sit up everytime you were sick," because when this scene started, we are in Harry's POV and we're not really aware that he has woken up before. Maybe he doens't remember it, but as a reader I thought that this was the first time Harry had woken up since the last written one.

    I am a little puzzled over Hermione's actions. As I was reading, it seemed okay that she went and helped Malfoy in the hall when he was trying to escape the hospital wing, but then I thought back and remembered that he had threatened to kill her parents. I'm not sure Hermione would have been quite so nice after that. I liked how Snape caught them and how Hermione ratted on him though. :)

    I wish that Draco and Harry would have had more antagonism in the hospital wing. I think that would have been more entertaining, incharacter and create a better story overall if they still acted like the mostly hated each other now. There are times when they do, but I think that they are acting too nice other times.

    I loved Snape in the chapter, I also really like your Dumbledore. He's present but not overly so and he's fluid - he can show up and then go away and it's not like he's just being used. He's part of the story. 

    I forgot to mention what a fantastic line this was last chapter: "I’m on the only side worth fighting for," Harry stated.


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