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Reviews For Late Understanding
Title: Late Understanding 07 Jan 2023 2:49 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice story
Title: Late Understanding 23 Feb 2015 9:58 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    Nicely done.
Title: Late Understanding 23 Feb 2015 9:58 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    Nicely done.
Title: Late Understanding 17 Apr 2007 11:55 pm
Reviewer: Tracy (Signed) [Report This]
    I am SUCH an angst junkie! The misunderstanding was wonderfully done and Snape's explanation for it later was perfect. It was nice that they came to a complete understanding.
    Tracy
Title: Late Understanding 24 Feb 2007 11:34 pm
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I was sure that Dudley was going to say he knew about the robbery. It's nice to know that wasn't the case, but that he may just be developing into a better person if he was worried about Harry.
Title: Late Understanding 27 Dec 2006 11:03 am
Reviewer: catti666 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    : ) you relly got Dursleys to change their mind... Kinda sweet fic. Great job!
Title: Late Understanding 27 Dec 2006 1:29 am
Reviewer: @nnie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like where this story is going. the dursleys are just enough "Dursley". Is there a hint of a cousinly truce in the making?
Title: Late Understanding 23 Dec 2006 6:52 am
Reviewer: Lynx_lw (Anonymous) [Report This]

    This is a great beginnig!?!?!?! I don`t know if this one was a oneshot; but it`d be fantastic if you continue with the story.

    I`m curious about what happened during the fisrt three weeks; and whats going to happend from know on..

     

Title: Late Understanding 18 Dec 2006 7:37 am
Reviewer: pdantzler (Signed) [Report This]
    Good short story. I loved the ending especially, but I have to say that I wish you had chose to make it longer, at least eight chapters. So much happens that the narrator has to tell us that we never get to see any of the action. At the first fourth at least seems like back story or flashback. Remember, what people really want to see in fanfic is drawnout scenes and actual conversation. If it seems like to much work to make this into a long story, you might want you consider making your next story longer. Plot wise, you had alot to work with. Develop your characters and your scenes, and you'll have humdinger all the way around!

    Keep on writing.

    Perry

    Author's Response: This is a oneshot because I write so many Harry and Snape stories (long ones). My plot lines would overlap way to much with all my other stories if I expanded oneshots like this. I am currently writing 3 long chaptered stories (one of them a three or four story series), so to expand on this would just be repeating issues in my other stories and plotlines that are overused in other guardian fics. I understand what you mean, though, and thank you for taking time to say something.
Title: Late Understanding 16 Dec 2006 10:55 pm
Reviewer: sweets2 (Signed) [Report This]

    I was hoping that there would be more chapters to this. It just feels incomplete without seeing the rest of the summer. It also may help to show us some of the nightmares instead of telling us...

    Great job though


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