| Title: Punishment
| 02 Mar 2007 2:53 am
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| Reviewer: Immy (Anonymous)
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This is really good!!! I just can't wait for lucius to get killed or what have you and for them all to get emotionally better...
i love this story and how it is coming out please keep writing... i have to wonder what kind of internal injuries does severus have? is it just from the beatings or is something much more sinister at play.. hehe well i guess i'll just have to what to find out.
| Title: Punishment
| 21 Feb 2007 12:52 am
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| Reviewer: BrokenFlamesRebel (Anonymous)
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This is an outstanding story. Its so hard to find good storys but you made it onto my list. Please update as soon as possible.
You certainly keep the audience on the edge of their seat. I'm watching them start to work together, and I love it. Smart, tough people, healing and developing trust.
Good stuff.
Oh, this is such an intense story! I'm just dying to know what happens next ... those poor children, and I'm so impressed with Snape's bravery and care here!
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