Title: Chapter 3: Resistance
| 23 May 2019 10:10 am
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Reviewer: Kaleesh (Signed)
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I really wanted to like this. I loved the way you described Snape's personality, but his abject stupidity is just breaking my willing suspension of disbelief too much.
I'm really enjoying this fic so far, but you posted the same chapter twice. Any chance that you have another chappie hidden in the bowels of your computer?
Eee! This is on here. Well, I've already given you a long review under the name Samara-chan on FF.net, soooo I'll just say, yuss, your story is excellent; it is now on my fave fic list here; aaand keep writing, o' course.
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