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Reviews For Reading the Signs
Yeah - like indimidating certain Muggle families XD I like Harry's possessiveness over the jar - very cute, how he's all like, dude, a present! when really it's just a common curtesy XD HARRY YOU ARE TEH AWESOMENESS. Here, have some chocolate XD Author's Response: Harry IS the awesomeness, even if he gets confused about what’s a present and what’s not. It’s not his fault. And um yeah, personal errands…he wasn’t visiting anyone…he was buying new robes….really!
Author's Response: Thanks :) Keeping everyone as in-character as possible is important to me.
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Author's Response: Wow! Thanks so much :)
Author's Response: Heh, thanks. Chapter 4 should be up very soon.
Author's Response: I'm glad their interaction comes off well. Thanks for commenting!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it, and thanks for the review!
Even though I have read a ton of stories like this, I have enjoyed your beginning very much. It is flowing nicely, you have already had some interesting interactions between characters, and I fully expect to enjoy this story. You did a great job on the ending of this chapter. Snape is nicely snarky, while still being kind. Author's Response: Thanks, I'm really glad you're enjoying it, despite the fact that it's not the most original premise ever. Hopefully you continue to like it!
Your Snape is still snarky, but you can see the caring in him - and I absolutely LOVE that Harry went to the trouble of writing him a Thank-You, when most people wouldn't have even bothered!! Dare I hope that Snape's errands include laying a smack-down on Vernon? *LOL* Thank you for sharing this story with us!! Scarlett Author's Response: Hi, I'm really glad you're liking it so far, and thanks for the review. I thought the Thank You note was a nice touch on Harry's part. As for Snape's errands, well what he was off doing remains to be seen. |
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