Harry is so touching can't wait to see who Luka is
"Maybe Snape feeds bad potions students to it."
LOLOLOLOLOL. This entire chapter is full of 'lolololols', btw. Like that other line that I found, which is so perfect I'm going to add it to my growing list of Snape-isms:
"I suppose that would depend on what colour absolute foolishness is."
LYRA YOU ARE FUNNEH XD And made of awesomeness C:
Author's Response: Aw, I love it when people think I’m funny. I’m not actually trying to be, it just works out that way. And you are made of awesomeness too, for reviewing every chapter! WOW.
| Title: Chapter 9
| 14 Aug 2007 2:13 pm
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| Reviewer: Kate_360 (Anonymous)
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Oh, now you are going to be bored silly by how many times I am saying that Harry is too cute and I really liked the way you portrayed Harry and Severus.
Author's Response: No one ever gets bored with nice reviews :)
| Title: Chapter 9
| 23 Jul 2007 11:13 am
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| Reviewer: glassdragon (Anonymous)
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Wow! This is really great, keep up the good work! Ouch! McGonagall is going to get it!
Author's Response: Heh, thanks, glad you've been enjoying it.
hehe. I love Harry's attention getting schemes.
Author's Response: They're not exactly sophisticated, but they work :)
Should I start feeling sorry for McGonagall in advance?
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Not too badly, I don't think. Thanks for the review.
It's interesting to see the canon story make an appearance here. Harry sure has captured Snape's heart in a hurry. I think McGonagall needs to be very afraid.
Author's Response: Well, he won't *hurt* her, although I think he'll have a few choice words. And yes, Harry has certainly captured his attention, if not his heart.
*sigh* I love this story. The relationship between Snape and Harry that you've created is sweet, but not TOO sweet, if that makes sense... I wish the chapters were longer... :( Hahaha. Nicely done.
Author's Response: Heh, well you can have longer chapters with a longer wait for updates, or shorter chapters and quicker updates? Actually, the chapters are just short because that's how they flow, thematically. Thanks for the review!
I really love this story and the different angles that you have thrown into it. Good stuff! I love your Snape...and who exactly is Luka??? And when is Harry going to find out about the Stone?? Is he?? Good stuff, love it! Your writing is amazing. :)
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you like it. The mystery of Luka will be solved. Eventually ;) As well as your questions about the stone!
| Title: Chapter 9
| 15 Jul 2007 9:24 pm
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| Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous)
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This is pretty good. Snape and Harry are interesting, and it's well written. I have to take issue with Hermione, though. Early Hermione wasn't soft and sensitive, she was loud and obnoxious :). Also, the sign language thing doesn't make much sense. I would think that his teachers would be able to come up with something, like a charmed parchment that would show what he wanted to say, or whatever.
Author's Response: I don't know, I think Hermione's a pretty good balance between sincere and obnoxious (or at least know-it-all). Yeah the signing thing is contrived, but it becomes important later on.
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