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Reviews For Reading the Signs
Title: Chapter 10 08 Jan 2011 7:54 pm
Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed) [Report This]
    nice job Snape McGonagall was defintly just put in her place because if Ron was willing ot speak up and say that HArry was requesting Sanpe it says something
Title: Chapter 10 23 Jul 2009 8:49 pm
Reviewer: supergreak (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Um, I love your story so far. You've captured the characters well. But...
    "2 or 3 nights a week"
    First off, you use the same phrase at least three times. Substitute "a few nights" "a couple" "several" etc. Additionally, NEVER EVER use numerals in literature. Spell it out. It's not that hard.

    Author's Response:

    "Additionally, NEVER EVER use numerals in literature. Spell it out. It's not that hard."

    I wasn't going to respond to this at first, as I'm not sure there's a need to use that tone.  However...

    If you read the rest of the story, you can see that the majority of the time I follow that rule.  This was just a simple slip up on my part, not because "it's that hard". There was no need to be so condescending about it.

    As for the others, duly noted on the repetition, I'll watch out for that in the future, and thanks for the feedback on the characterization.

Title: Chapter 10 10 Jul 2008 3:59 am
Reviewer: ddamato (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! Go Snape! *big grin* Aw, this chapter rocks! haha :P
Title: Chapter 10 16 May 2008 7:15 pm
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    Go Snape!
Title: Chapter 10 10 Sep 2007 1:23 pm
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    OUCH. SNAPEY YOU PWN MCGONAGALL XD

    Plus I don't want to shout (which incidentally is impossible over the internet but let's suspend our disbelief for a second) but I was totally like I KNEW IT BIATCH when Snape was like, oh yeeah, I DID visit the Dursleys, didn't I ... XD

    SNAPEY - you can't hide anything from us XD

    Author's Response: Oops, did he forget to mention that little detail?  Well, that’s Snape for you.  He doesn’t do these things for attention, he does them for justice – something he has a strong sense of.  It’s just too bad there’s Wizarding Law Enforcement, because I would have had him do much worse things to Dursley.
Title: Chapter 10 14 Aug 2007 2:18 pm
Reviewer: Kate_360 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oooh! Snape was awesome, you are the best. Really, I love your writing style however do you manage to write that way? It's too cool to be easy, isn't it?*grins*

    Author's Response: Awww, thanks!  As to how I write this way -- I have no idea, I just always have :)
Title: Chapter 10 03 Aug 2007 7:14 am
Reviewer: pkrosche (Signed) [Report This]
    I love Snape's last line in this chapter! This is such an interesting twist to J.K.'s story, and it's brilliant. Keep updating because I have only a few ideas as to what's going to happen and want to see if I'm right! I also like how you seem to be keeping the plot from Sorcerer's Stone within your story-I've missed that in a lot of fanfics. Update soon!

    Author's Response: I'm definitely trying to keep the gist of the plot of PS, but this is obviously quite the AU :)  I'm really glad you enjoyed it, and the next chapter is now up!
Title: Chapter 10 25 Jul 2007 11:15 pm
Reviewer: akblake (Anonymous) [Report This]
    “I’m glad you think so Professor McGonagall, because I expect in the future when the boy is distraught enough to ask for me in the night you will escort him down to my quarters yourself.”

    Ok, my coworkers are really wondering at my sanity now... that sentance is so Snape I couldn't quit laughing. I almost could hear him say it, and imaging the look on McGonnagal's face didn't help with the giggle fit!

    Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it so much.  It was very much a spur of the moment addition.  Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 10 25 Jul 2007 4:27 am
Reviewer: gizmama (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story! Please update soon!

    Author's Response: Next chapter is likely up in the next few days.  Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 10 24 Jul 2007 10:21 pm
Reviewer: Foolish Wishmaker (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice update. Looks like things are looking up a bit for Harry, with Snape taking his needs seriously.

    Author's Response:

    Things are getting there for Harry, although there will be a few bumps in the road...

     

    Thanks for the review! 


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