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Reviews For Reading the Signs
Title: Chapter 18 16 May 2008 8:32 pm
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    Woo-Hoo!!!
Title: Chapter 18 07 Nov 2007 9:16 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    "Slowly. . .slowly. . . he reached a hand out -- just his thumb really -- to stroke the back of Harry's hand. He hoped the gesture would soften his next words. There was a time for reassurance, but he would not coddle the boy. It would aid neither of them."

    **I loved the description of that gesture. So subtle, yet incredibly sweet.

    Severus giving Harry a bedtime just...well...made me feel extremely cuddly. I'll admit it. lol. I love it when Snape acts fatherly. *sigh*

    A good chapter!

    Author's Response: Hee, it made me feel all cuddly too!  And I'm glad you liked that particular bit, it was one of my favourites too.
Title: Chapter 18 07 Nov 2007 4:25 am
Reviewer: sweets2 (Signed) [Report This]
    Love what you are doing with the story. Please continue it soon. The question is will Harry learn to trust him or will the self-imposed silence keep going. Even though he said he would say one or two words plus incantations.

    Author's Response: You will see son, that Harry is having a bit of trouble.  Hopefully it will all work out soon.
Title: Chapter 18 07 Nov 2007 12:51 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved this chapter! It's so fulfilling to see how far Harry and Severus have come, and even if Severus isn't entirely comfortable with this closeness, he certainly isn't rejecting it either. In fact, his subconscious is probably quite pleased.

    Looking forward to more!

    Author's Response: His subconscious is definitely trying, that's for sure!  And no, neither one of them are entirely comfortable.  They've never been in this type of relationship before.  But they're getting there!
Title: Chapter 18 07 Nov 2007 12:09 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry is a force of nature! Not only does he have Severus protecting him, but he now has Severus adopting him in all but the legalities. I'm sure those are coming up soon. You are doing a great job showing the process Severus is going through as he assumes his fatherly duties.

    Author's Response: He really is a boy to be reckoned with.  Severus can see what's happening to him, but it's completely out of his control.  It's fun to watch (and to write!).
Title: Chapter 18 06 Nov 2007 10:23 pm
Reviewer: ChibiSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh i hope you get featured, this is such a good story, i cant wait until you update again!Ahhh poor beltless Severus, sometimes a spell just doesnt cut it...lol.More Sev/Harry bonding please, but really you rock!!! Keep going please ^_^

    Author's Response: I'm glad you like it!  And no worries, I'll definitely keep going.  These two have quite the grip on me.
Title: Chapter 18 06 Nov 2007 10:19 pm
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter. Please update soon. I love how Snape is becoming so...parental.

    Author's Response: He is, isn't he?    It's fun, because he doesn't see it until after he's done it, and by then it's too late :)
Title: Chapter 18 06 Nov 2007 9:58 pm
Reviewer: cathyrf (Signed) [Report This]
    "while he may no longer be a Death Eater, Severus was not a free man."

    Yup, and that's why these kinds of stories are some of my very favorites. I love these interactions and how well you manage to ever so slowly wrap Harry around Snape's little finger (whether he likes it or not).

    Another great chapter and looking forward to the next one!

    Author's Response:

    They're both very slowly becoming entwined in each others lives, but Severus is more aware of it, and thus more aware of how powerless he is to stop it :-D

     Thanks for your review!

Title: Chapter 18 06 Nov 2007 9:44 pm
Reviewer: Keina (Signed) [Report This]
    I love your story as ever !
    please mooore ;-)

    Author's Response: Thank you!

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