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Reviews For Reading the Signs
Title: Chapter 24 12 Feb 2008 9:21 am
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    Another excellent chapter. This is such a powerful story - every time you update I get sucked into it again and end up rereading the previous chapters! Very well written, as always.

    I'm eager to find out what happened in the chamber, and what will happen next in Harry and Severus' relationship.

    Author's Response:

    It's powerful for me too, it's actually hard not to waste the day writing about these two!

    We certainly will find out what happened to Severus, but we have to deal with his relationship with Harry first.

Title: Chapter 24 12 Feb 2008 4:30 am
Reviewer: Eva (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow!!! I really loved it and the way Harry said Daddy and the reactions! That was pretty awesome, hope you update soon.

    Author's Response: I'm glad you liked that part, I was pretty unsure about it, to tell the truth.
Title: Chapter 24 11 Feb 2008 11:00 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    "Daddy." Sniff, sniff. I loved Poppy channeling Hermione in her explanation and Snape's snarking in this chapter about the school really being hell. Lovely chapter.

    Author's Response:

    Heh, Snape even wakes up snarking, it's his default setting.

    Yeah, the other bits were meant to be sniffly though ;)

Title: Chapter 24 11 Feb 2008 10:27 pm
Reviewer: Tsuby (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, another lovely chapter. I was really missing your story, thank you for updating!

    Author's Response: Thank *you* for reading and reviewing, I'm glad you liked it.
Title: Chapter 24 11 Feb 2008 9:54 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Ouch, what happened to Severus?! It is a good thing Harry made McGonagail listen.

    Thank you the story.

    Author's Response: You're welcome!  We'll find out what happened to Severus soon.  I'm working on it :)
Title: Chapter 24 11 Feb 2008 7:43 pm
Reviewer: Elise_Malfoy (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, oh, oh! that was ssssssssssssssooooooooooooooooooooo good! I love the 'Apparently what parents do is die!' line. So, so good, and just perfect for Harry. I could really see this whole chapter in my mind, very clearly.
    I LOVE the fact that Harry called Snape Daddy, and the whole ending bit. I also like the child psychology thing. I'm very interested in that subject, so, yeah, kudos to you! :)
    I can't wait for teh next update!
    Are we in for a heartfelt Snape talk anytime soon? I do hope so!
    And poor Harry, I must say. He must be mortified.
    Okay, gtg!
    LOVE IT!
    -Elise

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, Harry's pretty horrified with himself. 

    In fact, I found writing the bit where he calls Snape Daddy pretty difficult.  I went back and erased it and reinserted it, and erased it, and re-re-inserted it.  Even though it's completely understandable that he did so, it totally made me blush in embarrassment for him.

    But there was just no way around it.  Especially for me, because I know all the other times he was *thinking* it but never admitted it.  They weren't directly in the text, but they were there.

    Thanks for the review!

Title: Chapter 24 11 Feb 2008 7:04 pm
Reviewer: cathyrf (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry! When he said "Daddy" my heart just about broke, and then it did break entirely when all the adults looked at him and he fled. Oh, I've got to go find him and snuggle him.

    The cracks started when he said "what parents do is die." (Oh, Harry, come out, come out wherever you are...you need a hug).

    How can you not love Poppy? The look and retort she gave Severus was priceless.

    I really need that next chapter soon so I know Harry's okay. Please?

    Author's Response:

    I know, poor Harry.  He just couldn't help himself.

    I'll do my best to let you know how Harry's doing asap :)


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