sometimes it takes getting what one absolutly needs to bridge the gap of scilence
sometimes it takes getting what one absolutly needs to bridge the gap of scilence
awww Harry has defintly gotten through the shields that Snape puts up
when Harry reached out for help
and Dumbldore being put in his place loved it
wow that says so much since for someone who was abused trusting especially an adult is not easy Dumbldore is right harry wouldn't do this unless he felt safe
awww I love the gift and I love Ron I can so see him being able to understand he is a lot more observent than people gie him credit for
nice job Snape McGonagall was defintly just put in her place because if Ron was willing ot speak up and say that HArry was requesting Sanpe it says something
| Title: Chapter 25
| 24 Jan 2010 2:21 am
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| Reviewer: Quenderra (Anonymous)
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Bravo! I love how you wrote this piece and found it to be quite plausible. Though, Rowling's original Harry is, indeed, rather well-adjusted despite his growing up life, I believe your depiction of Harry is very valid. Besides, AU is for taking liberties, is it not?
Beautifully written - 9 stars (but only because that tense change several chapters back really threw me for a bit. >.-)
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