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Reviews For Reading the Signs
Title: Chapter 20 27 May 2008 9:10 pm
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    You may be criticized for the choice of how Severus handles this, but I personally think you're right. Severus is a professional who works with children. Even if he's not usually crazy about them, he still has properly protective instincts. Visiting a site like this is an objectifying way of viewing 'the other side' of burning. It removes the pretty, fascinating way flames look, and shows--as objectively as possible--what can happen. Harry could have ignored words, no matter how impassioned. Severus needed him to know WHY this was important, and in a way Harry couldn't ignore.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  You've managed to put into words exactly the rationale I was trying to get at.  Harry needed to see what could happen if he played with dangerous spells.  The words would not have been enough.  As we know too well, our young protaganist tends to rush off even when warned.
Title: Chapter 25 27 May 2008 8:45 pm
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    What a wonderful story! I've really enjoyed reading this, straight through in two sittings!

    Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it, and it is the ultimate compliment when someone reads a story with so few breaks :)
Title: Chapter 22 27 May 2008 8:21 pm
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter; really well done.

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 13 27 May 2008 7:11 pm
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    You mis-typed the wrong homonym: "'Come.' He was guided to the footstool and handed a VILE" should be amended.

    Author's Response: Thanks. I did know that, but never quite got around to fixing it.
Title: Chapter 25 27 May 2008 4:46 am
Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome. Harry obviously has a lot more healing to do but it nice seeing Sev bend to meet him. That Harry wasn't as impulsive and was starting to trust an adult. Another thing I liked is that in this story Dumbledore wasn't going to stand in the way or insist Harry go back even if he did nothing to stop it earlier. Can't wait for the sequel

    Author's Response:

    Yes, Harry definitely still has a long way to go!  I'll be exploring that in the sequel.

    Thanks for reviewing.

Title: Chapter 25 16 May 2008 11:38 pm
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    Woo-hoo! Sequel!! Great Fic!

    Author's Response: Glad you liked it, and thanks for all your reviews!
Title: Chapter 24 16 May 2008 11:19 pm
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    Sniff, You are awesome!
Title: Chapter 23 16 May 2008 10:42 pm
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    Woo-Hoo! Son!!!
Title: Chapter 22 16 May 2008 10:16 pm
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    Woo-Hoo!
Title: Chapter 21 16 May 2008 10:05 pm
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow Touching chapter again!

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