That was a deliciously sinister meeting with Malfoy. Thanks for the great chapter.
Loved the moment Harry jumped into his Daddy's arms.
Ooh, Lucius Malfoy is a slimy one. Grr. But good for Snape on bringing up Draco!
I loved the scene of Harry rushing back up the path. That's a beautiful image right there. ;-)
Title: Chapter Six
| 15 Oct 2008 2:24 am
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Reviewer: Livi (Anonymous)
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Hey Pumpkin pie, Malfoy-ooh. So evil, so much possibility. You almost did him justice, but not quite. 'Annoyingly tedious' is a little bit out of place. You could probably shorten or cut that sentence without causing any harm. However, I LOVE Severus in the interaction. He's just so Fabulous!
Title: Chapter Six
| 09 May 2007 10:05 pm
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Reviewer: Derby (Anonymous)
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Lucius being all nasty. Snape being all snarky all possessive. How wonderful. I love your writing style. Keep up the good work!!
Nice to see that Snape is really starting to bond with Harry. :)
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