Dumbledore’s subtle manipulations were nicely done, even as they were transparent to Snape. Dumbledore’s reasoning was sound as well.
Interesting start to your story!
| Title: Chapter Two
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| Title: Chapter One
| 16 Mar 2022 9:45 pm
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Very manipulative thank you
| Title: Prologue
| 16 Mar 2022 9:39 pm
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Excellent start thank you
So good to read this again.
I’m glad you included the last chapter with th teacher. It was very emotional, I loved the story
Yes, it indeed is coming along splendidly!
Oh, I like it so far! Glad I cam across it!
I enjoyed this fic. Looking forward to starting the next in series (as soon as done typing this!)
Do hope the year one teacher is somehow involved later. That would be great, I think. However, how ever you have written this is going to be just fine with me (aka: I didn't write this and I'll just deal.)
Like that Neville is involved early on. They would have made great best friends/brothers.
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