| Title: Epilogue
| 18 Sep 2009 7:23 am
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| Reviewer: DS (Anonymous)
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It's such a beautiful and touching story! I have been reading your stories for a while now, whenever I need something heartfelt to put me to rights when I am a bit down. So today I decided to leave a review. I hope you will continue writing more stories about these two!!
| Title: Epilogue
| 10 Sep 2009 1:03 am
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| Reviewer: chris (Anonymous)
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I really enjoyed this story all the way through! I especially liked watching Harry and Snape bonding. Great job!
Enjoyed this so much! Very touching! Keep up the good work!
Such a cool ending for a cute story. I don't know why, but I really just love the image of Severus Snape standing at the end of a long driveway, black coat swirling about him in the cold wind, just standing still. That is the coolest thing.
Anyhow, I really loved this! This is going onto favorites. Good job and thanks for a great read! :-)
That was an unexpected turn. I'm not sure how I feel about Neville coming to stay, but it could work I suppose.
I do like how Harry was getting reassurance at the end though. That was sweet.
Aww...
"...Your smile's in your heart..."
I think I shall cry.
Oh yeah, and I also love your reference to Charlie Weasley and his dragons. ;-)
Aww! I love the once-reluctant-daddy. The little bath and bed time ritual is adorable, along with the hair coming.
This made me laugh out loud:
"...he was more than a handful, he was a bloody vocation." Haha!
Of course, the food hoarding is really sad. I hope Harry will feel safer soon.
Ooh, Lucius Malfoy is a slimy one. Grr. But good for Snape on bringing up Draco!
I loved the scene of Harry rushing back up the path. That's a beautiful image right there. ;-)
That is so sad... poor Severus. And poor Harry, too, even if he doesn't quite understand yet. I felt so bad for both of them when Snape was trying to explain the last 4-5 years to him.
Though this part did make me laugh:
"Oh to be a Death Eater again, for just five minutes..."
It's kinda sad, but it still made me giggle. ;-)
Aww, how sweet! This is really good. The only "complaint" I have at all is that I would strongly suggest you do a bit a more in the beginning to emphasize that Snape is *not* already a Professor at Hogwarts.
But besides that, I am thoroughly enjoying this. ;-)
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