In the phrase "...for just a moment as her image began to fade Snape imagined he saw one other image in the mirror, a lean brown hand that rested on her shoulder. She almost appeared to be laying her cheek to the back of that hand," is the hand supposed to be Severus'?
Do tell...
| Title: Chapter Twenty
| 08 Apr 2008 4:38 am
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| Reviewer: Diana (Anonymous)
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| Title: Chapter Twenty
| 09 Sep 2007 7:42 pm
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| Reviewer: rosemaryeve (Anonymous)
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what a wonderful story, I really enjoyed reading this.
Oh, I loved this story!!! I love how you have the relationship growing between the two. I can't wait ot see hwat happens next.
| Title: Chapter Twenty
| 08 Jul 2007 4:38 am
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| Reviewer: Maegwin (Anonymous)
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I just wanted to say that Mine/Snape's Vocation is my favorite Harry Potter gen story. I first read it over a year ago and I've reread it many times since. All of the characterizations are extremely well done. They still seem like themselves despite the different circumstances (I liked Lupin in particular). There's such a feeling of magic throughout, and I liked all the little wizard world details, such as the family outing to the dragons. I think this really captured the spirit of the first book.
| Title: Chapter Twenty
| 11 May 2007 12:12 am
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| Reviewer: Derby (Anonymous)
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This was a truly lovely story. You show great depths in your writing. Your characters are so three dimensional that they are real. I hope to read many more stories from you in the future.
| Title: Chapter Twenty
| 30 Apr 2007 1:42 am
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| Reviewer: miss june (Anonymous)
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Holy Crap! This is the best HP/SS gen kid fic i have ever read. You make your charactors really come alive and still you keep to cannon.Loved it!!! I know everyone is probly reading "Mine" right now because it is featured, but i think "Snapes Vocation" is your best work on here.
I liked your little touches too. I loved how Snape would say "Just so." when agreeing with Harry.
Really just fine work! Well done!
That was bloody awesome! After I had once set my eyes on this story I was drawn to this story always when possible for a few days until I had gotten this read! I just love the whole thing and glad I happened to read this just when you had gotten to that point. I don't know if I should have awaited for next chappy to know what would happen! A great great job!
Yaay!! I am so glad you posted this story here - I consider it one of THE Classic Severus-Harry-Father-Son fics in all of the Harry Potter Fandom, along with your other story of course!!
I love your Severus - he is still the calculating Slytherin, though he uses his powers for good (protecting Harry)!! **grin**
And your Little!Harry is a marvel - such a good-hearted and mischeivious Sweetie!!
This story makes me *squee* with joy, and I sincerely do hope that you will write more of Harry and Severus and their life together at Hogwarts, because I just love this AU!!
Thank you!!
Scarlett
Had to leave you a review for this story too. The whole four part series makes me swell up with glee when I think about it. I spent the better part of two weeks reading the stories non-stop and you got me hooked onto a genre of HP fanfiction that I can't let go of. Great job! I hope to see the rest posted here soon!
Keira
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