They're just so darned perfect together.
Hahaha!
So many humorous touches that really bring this to life.
And my Sam is just like Harry - attracting dirt in the middle of a spotless room!
You brought tears to my eyes.
Wonderful.
| Title: Chapter Eleven
| 06 Apr 2012 7:56 pm
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| Reviewer: Foreverhope (Anonymous)
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OH MY GOODNESS SNAPE MAKES A SCRAPBOOK. That is equal parts adorable and hilarious. Nice work!
| Title: Chapter Nine
| 02 Apr 2012 7:27 am
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| Reviewer: Foreverhope (Anonymous)
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The interaction between Fudge and Dumbledore is exactly as I would have pictured it. Brilliant!
| Title: Chapter Eight
| 02 Apr 2012 5:34 am
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| Reviewer: Foreverhope (Anonymous)
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Oh my goodness this is adorable! I know I keep saying it, but it bears repeating. I love how Snape is so guarded and sharp, but is slowly beginning to open up over the course story because of Harry. The picture of them stirring the cauldron together is just too cute. Well done!
| Title: Chapter Six
| 31 Mar 2012 7:58 am
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| Reviewer: Foreverhope (Anonymous)
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Awww...Snape got flustered! It's good to see him letting his walls down a little, even if it was an accident. I've never seen our dear potions master become flustered enough to flee from a room; it was kind of a refreshing sight. I love that one little boy can be his undoing. In every father-son fic I've read, Harry truly is his salvation.
I love the characters you're working with here. Lupin and Neville are brilliant additions. I like that your Lupin isn't a complete push-over. He's shrewd like Severus, and can communicate on his level. He also stands up for his old friends, while still being loyal to what Harry needs.
Also, I'm glad to see the Snape-Dumbledore mentorship you're building. I love seeing a positive relationship between those two men. Severus needs it so badly, even though he would never admit it.
Anyhow, those are just my reactions so far. Hope that it's helpful!
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