I love how Harry and Neville are getting along! And the good night kiss scene, very cute!
Oh Harry.. he just makes me melt. Poor Severus, he's seems so lost but he's doing a great job so far. It's okay to make mistakes. I hope things get better soon! Fab job :)
aww i love little Harry! gr8 job!!
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| 06 Jan 2010 8:12 am
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| Reviewer: Silvercloud (Anonymous)
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| Title: Chapter Three
| 23 Aug 2008 1:25 pm
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You have had personal experience of small boys - obviously - it shows in how well you have captured their speech and thoughts. Great story.
aww i loved that! i dont think i even reviewed the first part, i was so eager to read this one! it was very well written and made me smile many times, a lovely story with a happy ending
| Title: Chapter Twenty
| 10 Jul 2008 12:25 pm
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This is such an amazing story. Love this so much.
In the phrase "...for just a moment as her image began to fade Snape imagined he saw one other image in the mirror, a lean brown hand that rested on her shoulder. She almost appeared to be laying her cheek to the back of that hand," is the hand supposed to be Severus'?
Do tell...
"Where do you get your energy?"
"Sausages?"
Loved it!
I love you for having made Severus cry--and most of all, for having it be believable. This was a very heartfelt chapter. Well done, indeed.
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