| Title: 32 : The Why of Things
| 03 Aug 2010 4:49 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Oh my! Imagine if Draco knew now that Horris was really Harry! This story is amazing.
| Title: 32 : The Why of Things
| 02 Aug 2010 4:54 am
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| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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Really interesting chapter. I love how this plot is progressing; it's so original and psychological
I tend to wander when I need to get my mind off things. Horris' method is probably a bit more effective, though.
| Title: 32 : The Why of Things
| 13 Jan 2010 1:14 am
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| Reviewer: malimed (Anonymous)
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Holy crow!!! This has to be the best Severitus story I've ever read. I especially love your portrayal of Ron. I've never been a big fan of the youngest Weasley son, and I think you're spot on. I can't imagine him staying loyal to Harry once he was out of the loop, especially as many times as he turned on him in the books. I also love that Horris and Draco click so quickly. I've always thought that they would make good friends. They compliment each other much better than Ron and Harry, and their experiences give them more in common. Ron is a great foil for Harry, but a very poor friend. I also think that this Hermione fits quite nicely with Horris. I can't ever understand why she fell for Ron in cannon, and cannon Hermione is a little too bossy for cannon Harry. This Hermione is a little more subdued, though, and Horris' Slytherin cunning makes him a bit smarter than cannon Harry. I like your use of the journal and of Snape's restored memory. I think the idea of getting part of your memories back makes the huge attitude change more believable. The plot is incredibly intruiging. I'm especially excited about all the little sub-plots you seem to be weaving. What did Lupin need to tell Harry about Lily? What on earth is going on with Sirius? What is Dumbledore's next move? I can't wait to see how it turns out!
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