| Title: 16: Venom of Slytherin
| 10 May 2007 1:41 am
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| Reviewer: elsolel (Signed)
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I don't usually review in the middle of the story, but, wow so far!
| Title: 54 : Endgame
| 04 May 2007 9:07 pm
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| Reviewer: WinterChanterelle (Anonymous)
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But but but but but Voldemort is still alive! Neither can live while the other survives! Voldemort will win the war now, Asps, Dumbledore or not! I know I'm rambling, but the hope of the wizarding world is dead! Now is the time we are all supposed to realise that the Boy-Who-Lived wasn't in fact dying! He can't die, not after all this! Oh, this is most... most...
You are an amazing author, your fantastic writing and characterization skills are vindicated in the fact that my review started with an emotional response. Thank you very much for the read, but how, how is the wizarding world supposed to survive now, if the best person in the wizarding world is dead? Now I'm going to snoop around your profile hoping there's a sequel explaining how he isn't really dead. I mean, I've seen evil cliffhangers, but this goes beyond anything. If there isn't a sequel... and he is dead... all I can do is grieve for the loss. Must you write so amazingly well that I feel it so deeply?..
* crying *
I just found this story yesterday, and was up well past midnight reading it. I was riveted. The story had real depth and reach, and was beautiful in many ways. I was grief stricken at the end...
I love it.
| Title: 54 : Endgame
| 03 Apr 2007 3:16 am
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| Reviewer: Jess (Anonymous)
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It was well written but the ending was depressing.
Omg, you had to go and kill him... I know Dumbledore woudln't have been too happy about him either case but still... he didn't have to die! Killed by taking out of his... powers. Not even Voldemort is dead and you are already done with this story... This doesn't feel like the story is over! There's got be something more, even epilogue! Not that it makes me enjoy that story any less that he died... I just loved this story!
WTF!!! no no no no *shakes and sobs* no no no no no NO!!!! forlorn hope indeed
| Title: 54 : Endgame
| 28 Feb 2007 6:13 pm
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| Reviewer: Alexandra (Anonymous)
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OMG! You cannot just end it there! Are you going to continue? You have to continue, I'm begging you! Please tell me you ARE continuing. If you are when? By the way, it was was really good! Ive just read it for ages having to get to the end. If you want critisisms, my only one is that you have to make a sequel (but you wouldn't have guessed that!). Hope to read more!
Alex
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