| Title: 54 : Endgame
| 25 Feb 2007 1:26 am
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| Reviewer: Dragonrider Novera (Anonymous)
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What's this? It's a series? Yay for me! This is so cool, you had it planned like this from the very beginning didn't you? You sneaky sneakster!I say, since you had it planned out from the beginning, and not because a ton of people liked it, continue! Write that sequal! *Wipes tears away and dances for joy*
| Title: 54 : Endgame
| 25 Feb 2007 1:26 am
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| Reviewer: Dragonrider Novera (Anonymous)
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What's this? It's a series? Yay for me! This is so cool, you had it planned like this from the very beginning didn't you? You sneaky sneakster!I say, since you had it planned out from the beginning, and not because a ton of people liked it, continue! Write that sequal! *Wipes tears away and dances for joy*
Author's Response: nope... didn't have it planned at all. I really did want to end it right where FH ended. Making it into a series (beyond the GSLT and Ammodytus side stories) was never my intention... and I didn't for a good while. Only reason it's here so soon is because FH is a repost from when FF.net deleted it due to me responding to reviews >_<
| Title: 54 : Endgame
| 25 Feb 2007 1:16 am
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| Reviewer: Dragonrider Novera (Anonymous)
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Oh my God! You did not just do that! I am actually about to cry. Not only did the bad guy get away, but Horris dies! Thanks to his ex-best friend! I had held out hope, I mean the forshadowing was just to obvious right? It had to be a lie, a way to mislead! If it wasn't so good, I would be reaching through the screen right now to to make you wright a sequal. *Sob* This is more depressing then when Sirius died, and I can't help but thinking that the actually seventh book will have a simialar outcome. Such conflicting emotions! I don't know if I love it (because it is so well writen) or hate it (Horris dies!)*Quickly rates story a 10 before logging off to go cry into pillow*
| Title: 54 : Endgame
| 23 Feb 2007 1:22 am
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| Reviewer: Firenze (Anonymous)
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i have read all of it, and i must say, although it was a good plot, u missed ALL of the lessons and conversations and normal things you would do in a school, you didn't describe if he was a nice looking person, if the girls there wanted to shag out his brains or what, nothing really.. i dunno nothing really seemed to run smooth, almost as tho the pages of a book have been ripped out randomly, leaving this story, it's still good, but it is also missing alot, i think my discriptions and things would be better, but for a first story, (forgive if i'm wrong) i think it was a great try :) u have set me in the mood for my serverus/harry scenarios, they are very good :)
-Firenze The Unworthy- 8-)
| Title: 6: The Ammodytus
| 21 Feb 2007 9:37 pm
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| Reviewer: Firenze (Anonymous)
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It's good, i just think maybe a bit more explaining where they are, some of their feeling (especially harry's) maybe i think that could inhance it, but nice story so far, green eyes eh wonder who that could be.. :P
| Title: 1: The Vault Reopens
| 20 Feb 2007 4:04 am
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| Reviewer: LordThingy69 (Anonymous)
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BRilliant! Pure Brilliance!!! Loved it thoroughly!
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