Great chapter with brilliant character interactions
| Title: 32 : The Why of Things
| 02 Aug 2010 4:54 am
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| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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Really interesting chapter. I love how this plot is progressing; it's so original and psychological
Great chapter; your depiction of the seer was both serene and a little creepy, which I thought was very effective
| Title: 30 : Past Recollections
| 02 Aug 2010 4:42 am
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| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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Poor Sirius; I love the way you've portrayed his thoughts and the dramatic irony is absolutely heartbreaking. The Phoenix Heartstring wand was a very interesting idea
Oh Harry/Horris, going off by yourself in the middle of the night is dangerous, isn't it?
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I'm intrigued
Interesting chapter with great Hermione/Ginny, Harry/Draco interaction
| Title: 18: … Lion in the Snake Pit
| 02 Aug 2010 4:28 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Oh oh! I don't know whether to trust Draco or not. It would seem that Harry and Hermione are an item. Great chappie.
Great chapter. Poor Harry, you're really keeping us in suspense over what Voldemort did to him
Interesting chapter. I like how you've twisted Ron's character and Harry's interaction with Voldemort is very believable
| Title: 26 : Dancing with Fire
| 02 Aug 2010 4:16 am
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| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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Great chapter: I loved the Harry/Draco, Remus/Severus interaction. I thought the conversation about Lily and James was very poignant
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