| Title: 25 : Asps, Death Eaters and Harry
| 02 Aug 2010 4:09 am
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| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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Great chapter; Voldemort's letter was very interesting. I love how you portrayed Ginny and Hermione's reluctance to tell her about Ron until after Christmas- it was very believable
Interesting insight into the Order; I love the complex and very human backstory you've built up behind the characters
Lol! I wondered whether Harry was a tiger ^^. Great chapter; the image of Lily's tigeress chasing James' stag's really quite funny.
Wonderful chapter: I loved the Harry/Severus interaction
Great chapter. Poor Hermione; everything's going wrong for her at the moment
Really interesting chapter; Ron becoming a serpent was an inspired idea (despite the fact that Boas are exceptionally friendly, usually very gentle, loving snakes lol!)
Great chapter; can't wait to find out what Harry's animagus form is. It sounds like some sort of greater cat.
| Title: 18: … Lion in the Snake Pit
| 02 Aug 2010 3:22 am
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| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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Facinating chapter; really interesting developments between Ron, Hermione and Harry
| Title: 17: Snake in the Lion Den…
| 02 Aug 2010 3:14 am
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| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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Very interesting twist; although I don't think canon Ron would have defected, I can certainly see how certain traits, if tweaked, could make him very much like Peter Pettigrew. I loved the Harry/Voldemort interaction: Harry's clearly marked out for the Alpha lol!
| Title: 17: Snake in the Lion Den…
| 02 Aug 2010 3:04 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Oh, I bet that "Harry" is the "Alpha" isn't he?
Oh, you are such a gifted writer Elssha.
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