Title: Polyjuice, More Victims, and Tears
| 18 May 2010 4:49 pm
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Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Title: Polyjuice, More Victims, and Tears
| 12 Mar 2009 9:59 pm
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Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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Hmm...last couple paragraphs seem a little sudden... I dunno if Harry would automatically hug Snape - I'd have Snape be the "active" party, and Harry more passive.
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