Thanks for the amazing read!
I think it’s brilliant how Greg’s academic challenges are due to dyslexia. What a compassionate way to shed light on his struggle. I also loved the end - very fair!
This chapter felt like three excellent chapters in one! I seriously loved Harry coming to Severus for help and the compassion Severus showed. You’ve given us a deep and rich view of him as a father. I also loved Harry’s rationale for how he handled Grimauld Place, and the end of this chapter was priceless!
You’ve captured the addiction of self harm and the clearing of the fog in the mind so incredibly well. Thank you for this amazing chapter.
This story contains an astounding convergence of action, intrigue, drama, and deep personal and interpersonal dynamics. I really appreciate how you’ve integrated self harm into your story in a way that feels authentic.
Amazing chapter! I wonder why Lucius wasn’t suspicious of Draco suggesting a mild blindfold spell, as opposed to something more blood thirsty.
| Title: A Word, Harry, if You Please
| 20 Feb 2022 12:59 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Oh no, no, that didn’t just happen! This is a truly riveting story.
Great chapter, thank you. The patty cake line was hilarious.
Oh no, this all feels so dangerous for Draco. Thanks for the nice chapter.
| Title: A Word, Severus, if You Please
| 20 Feb 2022 12:12 am
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I really like the juxtaposition of Harry struggling with expectations of being a savior and Draco struggling to avoid the expectations of a death eater he was raised with — and Severus having to parent both.
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