I love the concept of truthful dreams and the way you so masterfully described that dream scene.
Wow, another powerful and beautiful chapter, thank you.
| Title: Delegation from Gryffindor
| 16 Feb 2022 1:29 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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A nice familial chapter. I’m glad Harry feels secure enough to speak his mind to Severus.
This was such an intense chapter, and so well done. Thank you.
I love that you came up with such a nice tradition. Though I wish Harry wouldn’t further his academic reputation towards laxity…sigh.
Oh no, a jealous Harry. I hope they can find their way past the discord to some state of familial harmony soon.
You have the most amazing way of writing absolutely perfect lines to end a chapter on.
| Title: Sometimes It Just Takes a Wizard
| 15 Feb 2022 1:12 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Exciting chapter, though scary that Harry’s refuge could be breached. The end was perfect and heart warming.
I love the way you’ve captured the angst of what Harry must be feeling in this chapter.
I deeply appreciated the powerful conversation between Harry and Severus. It was beautiful, wide ranging, and stirring.
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