Great start to your story. I really like this McGonagall of steel!
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| 27 Oct 2021 4:16 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a good start to the story
So I am one of those people who read this story [many] times on ff.net, but found myself to be so lazy that I didn't review (which was really quite stupid of me, because this story is like one of the best Harry and Snape gen fics I have ever come across XD)
So here I am XD
"McGonagall smiled slightly. “No, but as Deputy Headmistress, I can make your life quite miserable, you know. It’s only two more years, Severus and then he’ll be gone. I will not be. Do you really want to make an enemy of me?”
That's it, Minerva - open a can of WHOOPASS! on Snapey XD
Snapey - I can't decide if I should take points off of you for being an evil git, or give you points for being an evil git. Hmm. I shall have to ponder ...
Did I mention this story is awesome? XD
| Title: Prologue
| 29 Mar 2007 9:49 pm
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| Reviewer: Anon (Anonymous)
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It seems I am quite late in 'finding' this story, but as this site lets me review on a chapter basis I get to respond as if it's new. :D (Cookies galore to the site developers!)
So. I quite like it. Nice representation of Minerva. I like the way she leaves with a small, verbal slap of the hand.
I'm so glad to see you posting this here. This story is in my Top 10 of Snape and Harry fics -- maybe top 5. Thanks so much for posting here. I re-read this story periodically and will find it very nice to read here. At this point, yours were the only stories I was reading on the other site.
This was the story over on Sugarquill that ignited my Snape-mentors-Harry obsession, leading to me finding P&S and the whole wealth of Harry/Snape gen fiction. And this story is still one of the absolute best. Snape is so canon perfect, as are all the other characters.
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